Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Keyanna Jackson Blog 4

After reading the essays i have realized this is not what i am use too. I am use to writing a structured essay with each paragraph having a purpose. However i have realized that when reading the Getting Real in the Classroom i see that the structure of my essay will have to be more relaxed and flowed about my topic. I mean when i read clothing optional i realized that it was the better one out of all of them. The author really connected with myself and any other teenagers in the United states about clothing. It does make me laugh when it talks about the bad reasons to wearing jeans. I have seen that i should kind of write like this author however not copy her work. i think my essay will be good and my topic will be very revealing to others.

1 comment:

erika said...

i also feel the same way about the whole essay im not used to writing any essay like this either. to the tell you truth im still confused about the essay. i was thinkning about doing the dress code topic but then we used the example on the board so there went my topic. what are you thinking about writing your topic on?